Sunday, May 3, 2009

heartpiece

Her dew tastes like tears
her small ruby heart trembles
shatters in the mouth of cruel lover
and her face becomes a map of longing.

12 comments:

  1. Crazy piece, so short but so strong.Like the last line, "a map of longing". Thanks for sharing. LL

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  2. Ah. . .I know that feeling oh so well. She must love herself through this. Love will heal her heart.

    Peace, Light and Love. . . CordieB.

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  3. hey LL. ty for the crazy - luv that.

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  4. hey cordie, ahhh...hard to see now, ty.

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  5. Nicely put!!! Good job!!! Keep writing!!!

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  6. What powerful words...almost heartbreaking.
    I love the imagery in this line "shatters in the mouth of cruel lover"

    Nicely done,

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  7. uh huh, the trembling feels good as being
    the tremblee or the trembler - lol.

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