Crazy piece, so short but so strong.Like the last line, "a map of longing". Thanks for sharing. LL
Ah. . .I know that feeling oh so well. She must love herself through this. Love will heal her heart. Peace, Light and Love. . . CordieB.
hey LL. ty for the crazy - luv that.
hey cordie, ahhh...hard to see now, ty.
Nicely put!!! Good job!!! Keep writing!!!
What powerful words...almost heartbreaking. I love the imagery in this line "shatters in the mouth of cruel lover"Nicely done,
almost...almost, ty. WG.
Yes! yes it does...
uh huh, the trembling feels good as beingthe tremblee or the trembler - lol.