Sunday, May 3, 2009

heartpiece

Her dew tastes like tears
her small ruby heart trembles
shatters in the mouth of cruel lover
and her face becomes a map of longing.
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12 comments:

  1. LORENZOMay 3, 2009 at 7:39 AM

    Crazy piece, so short but so strong.Like the last line, "a map of longing". Thanks for sharing. LL

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  2. CordieBMay 3, 2009 at 8:49 AM

    Ah. . .I know that feeling oh so well. She must love herself through this. Love will heal her heart.

    Peace, Light and Love. . . CordieB.

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  3. NadegeMay 3, 2009 at 11:43 AM

    hey LL. ty for the crazy - luv that.

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  4. NadegeMay 3, 2009 at 11:44 AM

    hey cordie, ahhh...hard to see now, ty.

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  5. OpaqueMay 3, 2009 at 1:28 PM

    Nicely put!!! Good job!!! Keep writing!!!

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  6. The Write GirlMay 3, 2009 at 3:29 PM

    What powerful words...almost heartbreaking.
    I love the imagery in this line "shatters in the mouth of cruel lover"

    Nicely done,

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  7. NadegeMay 3, 2009 at 5:49 PM

    ty, bro!

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  8. NadegeMay 3, 2009 at 5:50 PM

    almost...almost, ty. WG.

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  9. billyMay 4, 2009 at 7:43 PM

    sweet..

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  10. NadegeMay 5, 2009 at 5:43 PM

    hey b.

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  11. KayJuly 29, 2009 at 10:16 AM

    Yes! yes it does...

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  12. NadegeJuly 30, 2009 at 4:52 PM

    uh huh, the trembling feels good as being
    the tremblee or the trembler - lol.

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