f luttering mercilessly inside my life
a long the length of my body lover fills me
t rembles the depths of my mind and soul
a ching inside from the rush, the thrill
l over's hands own me
a cquiescent lips kiss
t asting sweet water love
t he rare kind too hard to resist
r acing hearts beat to lust covenants
a lways near, my lover won't relent
c aution discarded and torn
t ogether dancing slow to amel larrieux's no one else
i ncognito behind dusk's mauve veil we won't repent
o h! we pass through folds of deeper hues 'till dawn
n ever really apart we sigh secret hymns of desire ...
nadege 4/09
*an acrostic challenge - visit: http://acrosticonly.blogspot.com/
Ah, took a while to sink in. Brilliantly written!!!
ReplyDeletety BR, you're awesome.
ReplyDeleteI love the duality of this.
ReplyDeleteduality increase depth for me ty A.
ReplyDeleteI love this! Truly creative and wonderful use of all the senses. Well worth the wait to read this one : )
ReplyDeleteLUV you thrilling response, ty WG
ReplyDeletelustfully delicious!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant !!!
ReplyDeletehey magic - ty.
ReplyDeleteprettypretty - ty.
ReplyDeleteNadege, thanks for joining the fun. I linked your acrostic.
ReplyDeleteIndeed, love is the one fatal attraction, that everyone is curse with, and sometimes it can be wonderful.
Do come back and play with us.
wonderful & scary.
ReplyDeletewow...
ReplyDeletehey lani! ty.
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