Sunday, April 19, 2009

Patience

can you hear her whimper ?
following the sound
most yearned for
i only want to cover her pain
but i'm selfish too
touch the part that hurts her most
past her perceived endurance
relish the tender response
drowning her before she realizes
being so steeped in emotions
she fights hard to keep below the surface
torturing herself in the past.

patience, darling:
life gives like the skilled lover
languid, in sighing stages
until each inch of skin is charged
and you implode with Joy.

16 comments:

  1. "patience, darling:
    life gives like the skilled lover
    languid, in sighing stages
    until each inch of skin is charged
    and you implode with Joy. "

    This is lovely!!! And, erotic too. A rather clean way of expressing carnal activity. Umm, your expression makes one look at it like love and not just some wild relation. Am I being clear here?

    Great writing!!! Keep them coming!!!

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  2. hey br. you're coming across loud and clear
    and ty.

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  3. Great emotions expressed in this piece. Your poems are full of life and imagery. Thanks for commenting on my poem : )

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  4. it's a joy to comment on your poetry WG. ty.

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  5. Ahh....so erotic. The wait is well worth it, passionate delay. Love it!!!

    Thanks for sharing. PLL, C.

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  6. Ahh. . . so erotic. Anything worth having is surely worth waiting for. . You make the wait seem so delicious. Thanks for writing.

    PLL, C.

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  7. hey cordie, anticipation is highly underated TY

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  8. yo... this poem is so tender it brought me to tears... whoo..man... lovin it.

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  9. Hi Nadege,

    I have an award for you. Stop by when you have a chance : )

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  10. hey WR, i'll come by tonight.

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  11. Hi Nadege,
    I read patience like five times,
    so beautifully written, you have an
    amazing way with words...keep doing your thing!!

    And as always thank you for your kind words and feedback to my expressions...

    Meagan

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  12. hey meagan, ty... you've read "patience"
    5x - i'm glowing.
    meagan, you blog is enlightning and fun.

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