Thursday, July 1, 2010

On Loving Rain


I'm the highest

note drifting into

your mind

allow me to open up

your sweet cells

one-by-one

and live there

whispering poems on

the tenderest parts

of your flesh

until there comes

a time

when others say

to you:

how are you?

and you'll speak

in lilacs

confessing feelings

as perfect and small

the rain drops

hidden inside your

mauve petals...



Nadege
7/1/10

32 comments:

  1. "Confessing feelings" - I get this!

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  2. oh yeah, confessing - good for the soul as
    well as all relationships. TY, Opaque.

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  3. What sensitive, beautiful, and sweet poetry here. I enjoy reading your works as always Nadege.

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  4. hey there pretty girl, TY, for the compliment.
    have a great 4th.

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  5. This was so pleasantly sweet it tickled me. I am always inspired by just the simple things you say, provoking thoughts/feelings of such magnitude!

    Lilacs Smiles,
    Meagan

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  6. ooO, so glad this turned your tickle box
    over, sexy Meagan.
    every so often I like to play lightly
    in love.

    TY.

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  7. darling thank you for sharing this.

    congrats on the new design of site

    big hug
    xx
    marian.

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  8. hey Diva M. TY, for reading & responding.

    XoXo,
    Nadege

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  9. Nadege! My long lost love... =( I've been MIA. I peep the dope new blog style. And of course your words. Thanks for sharing everything.

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  10. Dope Blog!!! Hi I'm Samson (Poet/Songwriter)

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  11. hey there Lany, how are you? I do check out
    your blogs, honesty and good music abound.

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  12. wishing you a great weekend sweetie.
    xoxo
    marian.

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  13. I'm doing great Nadege. Building momentum... =) You?

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  14. hey lany, just checked out your lastest post.
    what a wild video & trio - I luv the unique.

    "a wave of [re]birth washes over the city",
    how happy you will be how happy I will be also.

    enJOYed your poem - and the romantic line -
    put me to sleep with your lips.

    have you taken off comments?

    an altered book - always wanted to make one
    of those but not sure how to get started -
    is this an assignment - hope you will post
    the book - would be great if you could post
    the process - oh yeah.

    lany - continue to hold onto your sense of
    self, your confidence and your sensitivity.

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  15. Oh, you asked how am I - wonderful. I'm so
    in love with this 2010 summer - wow.

    doing volunteer work & wait for it - learning
    how to speak Chinese from a sweet, new friend.

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  16. No I haven't taken off comments. Its not working? They should be...
    And thanks for checkin out my post!!.. It fulfill me when I'm honest and open. And I'm so so so glad I know people like who who continuously support my growth. Truly, you are indispensable.

    Oh I have taken pictures of all my artwork! That will be in my next post. =)

    I agree this summer is one of a kind! So many things have happened. I sang at an open mic recently! My first time!!

    And, wow, Chinese? That's awesome... I'm tryna get my Spanish down. Then Ima work on Sign Language...

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  17. hoping you are having a lovely sunday dear
    xxx
    marian.

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  18. hi lany, I don't see a comments tab/link,
    just Home & Older Posts.

    spanish is invaluable in new york, I know
    a little, but continue to learn that language.
    sign language- smart girl! very useful talent.
    and you are a triple threat: you sing - like
    a sweet bird I'm sure.

    this must be the summer of learning and
    taking chances or breaking old habits for
    many woman.

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  19. hey Marian, it's 94 degrees here - so I'm
    hanging near the A/C trying to keep cool.

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  20. Ur so right, Nadege. You said it perfectly. And yes half my family is Puerto Rican, so I need to really get up on it. Haha.

    And sign language is beautiful... I wanna add it to the methods I reach people: Poetry, Painting, Singing, Dancing (working on it), and Sign Language. I'm so excited working on new projects and with new people. This is def a significant time in my life.

    I'm gonna try to see whats up with the comments though.

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  21. hey lany, perhaps the comments malfunction has
    to do with twitter, I notice a twitter pop-up
    pops up for one to sign in - maybe that is the
    only way to make a comment - but I'm not on
    twitter.

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  22. in this 'prose' who could not love the rain??? beautiful.

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  23. And I do love my soft summer rain. TY Kay.

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  24. I love what you say and how you say it
    Linda

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