Saturday, November 28, 2009

tanka this


poems will confess
on anyone
waiting here
for your truth
secrets to fill me




Nadege
11/09

18 comments:

  1. What an intriguing poem...words are filled with so many secrets and truths.

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  2. pretty girl, words/poems are brimming
    over with secrets - TY.

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  3. How true ... my poetry renders me naked.

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  4. Amias, you write from your soul. TY.

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  5. It's as if this poem is trying to tell us something? Leaves me personally wondering what that something is or isn't?

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  6. ahhhh meagan...just that I love secrets
    that slip into my ear like lozenges and
    fill my mouth like sweetwater breath
    making me spill...my own secrets.

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  7. lovely poem dear:)...n soo true...:)...

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  8. What an intruiging piece honey, so beautiful
    xx
    marian

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  9. marion, hey there...TY, I love how intriguing
    "writing" women are.

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  10. TY M. butterfly- hope to see you again.

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  11. From one poet to another...This speaks volumes...Like the reason we write, the reasons we are allusive when we want...Love it :)

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  12. hey J. a poem should have mystery & desire,
    that is hers.

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