Wednesday, January 6, 2010

when we make love

Forever my lover
Always here for you, yes
Caressing your pain away
Each tear becomes a diamond
Silent beauty in my arms


Nadege
1/06/10

22 comments:

  1. Short but so sweet and creative :)

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  2. wow... tat was something:)...good one:)

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  3. awwww...always so sensual! if diamonds are a girls best friend, and her tears to turn to diamonds...well, perhaps i would prefer a pearl :)

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  4. Oh my... This is really beautiful. You talented lady!

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  5. This is a bautiful pieces,so emotional
    xx
    marian

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  6. hey Kay, pearl or diamonds I'm in ... & like
    women each gem requires expert honing applied
    with much love.

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  7. hey there, Dulce TY - you are sweet.

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  8. hey there marian, beauty & emotion...hmmm.

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  9. Sensual!, like all of your writes. For some reason, this reminds me of tantric sex. Just beautiful, and spiritual!

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  10. hey Aj. tantric sex the ultimate.
    kudos on your new love.

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  11. I unraveled at the break...loved the prose!

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  12. hye val/pro -- TY...unraveling.

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  13. Quite lovely and stunning...I especially love the metaphor of tears becoming diamonds.

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  14. hey pretty girl TY. tears are precious
    to me.

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  15. my comment never made it so I wanted to also say this is a beautiful piece!

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  16. TY, M.Butterfly for your effort to comment
    on this poem.

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