Sunday, October 4, 2009

QuIeT LoVeR

Granite lips
Hollow out my heart
Obsessional angel denudes me
She lay down upon my body
Touching a familiar moon
Sweet wounds flower



Nadege
10.09

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18 comments:

  1. Sorry about causing you such duress, but in all the stories, short or long, that I write, there is always some truth in them. There are so many babies being killed by their parent pets, this is what inspired me.

    I like your take on the prompt, I especially love the first line - "Granite lips".

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  2. hey Amias, ty - yea, granite lips.

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  3. Always sooooo sensual! Love it!

    Peace, Light and Love, C.

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  4. hey there, Aj - you're turning me onto
    chopin - who knew -- nocturne me.

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  6. Awesome! TY. C.R. Stone
    warm kisses, Nadege

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  7. This is a delicious Acrostic

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  8. i like your own acrostic, deeply expressed, hard to decipher, a good lesson for an english class...like dissecting an acrostic!

    :)

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  9. amity, "a good lesson for an english class",
    oh i like that. - TY

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  10. Hi Nadege,

    Your words are stunning, imaginative, and beautiful. There is always a mix of love and pain...but I hope more love overflows from your words. Best wishes : )

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  11. hey there pretty girl. TY. for sure more
    love is overflowing, i'll accept nothing
    less, no doubt.

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  12. Mmmm...TY J. & TY for truly reading
    poetry with an open mind and heart.

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