Sunday, September 20, 2009

sublicious


sage
loves 'til

her skin hurts

names
this strange
bonding of mind,

heart,
limbs an
addictive bliss

vanishes
her ego ~
tres liberating


Nadege

12 comments:

  1. I tell you this Nadege, next month I will add an eroticism prompt to AO in your honor, because I love the seduction of your words. The pure raw erotics that are very classy, and this to me is most enjoyable.

    I like your style. You say so much with so few words, and many can't do that. They use few words, but they don't say nothing! If you don't have a book, you need to put one together ... I know I would buy it!

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  2. TYTY. i'm stoked now Amias. would love to
    pubish a little erotic chap.

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  3. Let me know when .. I am good at compling these things .. very good. I can set it up for you and put it in pdf format and you can sell it online without going to a publishing house. You can even put an ISBN number on it.

    How's that for sisterhood!

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  4. awesome Amias, when I write several more
    poems you'll me the first person to hear
    from me - no doubt. TY.

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  5. Hi Nadege,

    There is so much depth in this piece. I hope you publish your work also. Best wishes to you : )

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  6. Ok Lady Nadege, I have put an "eroticism" prompt over at Acrostic Only,marked it "Adult Only" because of our youth. I am hoping you participate. Also try "Linen Moments". I know you can do it, so I am hoping you take the time, as you have the whole month to come up with something.

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  7. hey Amias, cool prompts for the entire month.
    i'll give several a shot, my juices are flowing
    from some of your titles.

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  8. A captivating write. I always loved the word Sage. Very eloquent. The last lines are magnificent.

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  9. TY, shepoet. sage the sound makes your
    mouth fully embrace the word.

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