Sunday, September 13, 2009

FIVE

BRIDE


Marriage tent quivers
Older bride blushes
Her hopes high as the
Dessert sand at dusk
She sighs I Love You



Nadege

21 comments:

  1. wow...:)..soo wow...:).good one :)...

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  2. Oh my goodness .. this is so utterly beautiful. You creatively captured the moment.

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  3. Rapture, and true to form 5/5. Photo on the right should be inclusive. It would be an exquisite match. Though I'm not sure what she's holding though. Anyway, love it.

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  4. I wish I was that good with words, amazing!

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  5. PS: Hope you don't mind that I mentioned you in my post :)

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  6. hey shepoet, TY- i like the title rapture.
    & thanks for the mention. your poem is
    sensual and meaningful.

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  7. leigh, you have many talents, you blog
    attests to that. TY.

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  8. This is a sweet poem and very lovely. Thanks so much for your comment on one of my older posts. It was very thoughtful of you. Best wishes.

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  9. hey pretty girl, TY. & you deserve positive
    comments for you amazing poetry.

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  10. Nadge,
    I’m curious as to where your poetic inspiration comes from? If I may ask are these thoughts, or encounters, situations in which you take, combing them into one beautiful expression? I’d like to express myself with just one sentence or comment…not so easy!

    I pulled some thoughts from an old music icon, would love your thoughts!

    Best Regards,
    Meagan

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  11. hey meagen - my poetry comes from within
    my heart.

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  12. this is beautiful poetry! Lola Re

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