Saturday, August 8, 2009

Play me

acrostic nightpoem


Pulling me in and
All I desire is her voice inside my ear
Wanting to dominate our
Nights

21 comments:

  1. An inviting piece. I feel the longing for desire and submission. I love the word "PAWN", this gives your poetry more depth. Keep writing~

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  2. makes me feel good that you find this piece
    inviting. pawn is an appropriate word for
    my feelings which fueled this poem. TY shepoet.

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  3. The Dominatrix! Go get em! :)

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  4. What a beautiful acrostic...nicely woven and written.

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  5. hey pretty girl TY for the nicely woven.

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  6. nicely written acrostic...:)..keep penning:)...

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  7. Nadege! It's like...guerilla poetry. Swiftly attacking my senses...

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  8. I love an intense piece that says so much in relatively few words... more inspiration and motivation!

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  9. it sounds fun...but really i did not get hw it works..u know fives posted in here and not in our blog and all tat...

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  10. Hey Tulip - Allow me to explain the procedures:

    1. Write a Five: an erotic/sensual poem with
    5 lines, and each line has 5 syllable

    2. Send the poem to me via email at:
    littlepurplegoodyhood@yahoo.com

    3. I will post the poem on this blog.
    The poem is posted on this blog first, because
    readers will vote on the poem they enjoyed
    the most - so naturally I will post the poem
    without the poet's name.

    However, the Five Fun only last for a little
    over a week, so after the voting of course
    feel free to post your poem on your blog.

    How you will write a poem. Thanks.

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  11. Uh Oh, tulip - I meant to say -

    hope you will write a poem.

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  12. i love the poem! and thanks for the comment on my blog!

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  13. Sometimes being a pawn can be very exciting!

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  14. hey diane, TY {great dress today}

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  15. hey blicious, TY {your blog is merry}

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  16. amias, hey there. i'd have to agree, sometimes
    being a pawn is a deep thrill and there in
    lies the rub, so to speak. ahhhhh. TY.

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