sad...a broken beauty
miss. tulip ty
Although beautiful, this is sad! Nicely done!
You convey so much in few words as the poem trails off to sadness. What emotions expressed this piece.
I can relate. (Love u too!)
my heart is a quiet girl, pretty girl,so i let her write this one. TY.
your heart is deep, lany.
I'm thinking this holds a double meaning here. One of the literal impression and the other, a sensual one[?]. Either way, it has a melancholy allure and for such a short poem exhibits much. This is only proof that a poet don't have to be lengthy to make an impact.
hey shepoet, two meanings to this one, no doubt. TY.
She Poet hit the nail on the head ... but from where I am standing, I can see a triple meaning ... This is truly deep and packs a wallow!
i give A. - what's the triple meaning?
I knew this would make you smile Nedege ... I was thinking about being torn when I gave birth at seventeen -- the doctor was careless.
sorry to hear that amaias, women sufferso much under the hands of careless, thoughtless people when we are mostvulnerable - hold a good thought special lady.