I'm thinking this holds a double meaning here. One of the literal impression and the other, a sensual one[?]. Either way, it has a melancholy allure and for such a short poem exhibits much. This is only proof that a poet don't have to be lengthy to make an impact.
sorry to hear that amaias, women suffer so much under the hands of careless, thoughtless people when we are most vulnerable - hold a good thought special lady.
sad...a broken beauty
ReplyDeletei know.
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ReplyDeletemiss. tulip ty
ReplyDeleteAlthough beautiful, this is sad! Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteYou convey so much in few words as the poem trails off to sadness. What emotions expressed this piece.
ReplyDeleteI can relate. (Love u too!)
ReplyDeletety aj.
ReplyDeletemy heart is a quiet girl, pretty girl,
ReplyDeleteso i let her write this one. TY.
your heart is deep, lany.
ReplyDeleteI'm thinking this holds a double meaning here. One of the literal impression and the other, a sensual one[?]. Either way, it has a melancholy allure and for such a short poem exhibits much. This is only proof that a poet don't have to be lengthy to make an impact.
ReplyDeletehey shepoet, two meanings to this one,
ReplyDeleteno doubt. TY.
She Poet hit the nail on the head ... but from where I am standing, I can see a triple meaning ... This is truly deep and packs a wallow!
ReplyDeletei give A. - what's the triple meaning?
ReplyDeleteI knew this would make you smile Nedege ... I was thinking about being torn when I gave birth at seventeen -- the doctor was careless.
ReplyDeletesorry to hear that amaias, women suffer
ReplyDeleteso much under the hands of careless, thoughtless people when we are most
vulnerable - hold a good thought special lady.