Friday, July 3, 2009

SIX

RE: End of Affair


Resist this obsession
sadistic lover true
my sub-masochistic
shelf-life is overdone
cords that bind me, broken
the scent of my stripes fade



Nadege
6/09

17 comments:

  1. i can relate to this one. and btw who drew that piece in the far rite hand corner of ur page? =]

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  2. This is intense, this is powerful! Nicely done!

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  3. hey lany, yep this one hit home. the picture
    is an image, doesn't have a title or an author,
    just numbers and jpg. i punched in illustrations of nude woman and this is one
    of the entries of clip art that came up.

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  4. ty AJ - have a cool w/end. your songs
    are outstanding and full of the heart's
    soul and emotion.

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  5. I agree with AJ...this piece is intense, powerful, and painful. Your poem pushes on a different kind of love. You are certainly broadening your boundaries...keep it coming!!

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  6. Your "end of affair"...just nice Nadege!
    "Resist this Obsession" These very words ring so true to my very existence. I will definitely elaborate further, thank you for this.

    Meagan

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  7. PS...Love the photo with your end of affair. I found a painting so similar, that I'll share with you...I wonder if it's the same artist?

    Meagan

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  8. hey pretty girl, a different kind of love is
    a nice way to put it, but i'm so done - ty -
    for apreciating this "nude" poem.

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  9. hey there meagan, gratifying to know this poem
    touches a chord with you, & i will read your
    elaboration. would love to see the painting,
    i fell in love with the vulnerability that
    whispers from this woman.

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  10. Nadege, even ur comments are poetry. U have such a gifted soul.

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  11. Hey there! Youve got a nice blog, loved the way you've poured out the words and have blended them beautifully :)

    http://aspaceofonesown.blogspot.com

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  12. lany, your comment is blessing me on this
    warm summer soft-rainy night, your words ...

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  13. hey NB, ty - hope to see more of you.

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  14. Hi Nadege,

    Thanks for writing such kind words on my site. I look forward to reading more of your posts.

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  15. oh please pretty, your writing merits praise.

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  16. I've come back to this one a couple times, it resonates with me (obviously), you catch much of the feeling that most people just can't understand. I love this.

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  17. hey topaz, it's a feeling so hard to define,
    unless somewhere in the back of your mind
    and or heart ...

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