Saturday, January 10, 2009

scent

on her way to slipping down
she falls to the floor
her scent moistens my feet

6 comments:

  1. Hi Nadege,

    Beautfiul poem, succinct and full of emotion. I love the last line: "her scent moistens my feet."

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  2. wg-

    amazing
    how that
    can sweetly happen


    ty

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  3. beautiful, the word 'moistens' has much delicacy

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  4. mmm...i thought so - ty deep.

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